Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, avoid fillers (uh), correct phrasing, and add a brief specific detail or example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting reasons using linking words. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents couldn't afford one, and I also didn't know how to ride yet, so I mostly walked to school instead.

제안: Expand slightly with a supporting detail or example and use linking words to make the answer more informative and natural. Keep it brief (1–3 sentences) and include a reason or context.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and bike-sharing programs that many people use daily.

× 'my parents are not able to, uh, take a bike for me.'

✓ 'my parents were not able to buy a bike for me.'

'are' is present tense and does not match the past context set by 'when I was a child' and 'didn't have'. Also 'take a bike for me' is unnatural here; the intended meaning is that parents did not purchase or provide a bike. Use past tense 'were' to match the time frame and 'buy' or 'get' to express providing an item. Suggestion: use 'my parents were not able to buy a bike for me.'

× 'I was not able to, uh, drive to drive a bike'

✓ 'I could not ride a bike'

'was not able to' is grammatical but wordy and the verb 'drive' is incorrect for bicycles in English; we say 'ride' a bike. Also 'drive to drive' is a repetition. A clearer past-tense, concise form is 'could not ride a bike.' Suggestion: replace with 'could not ride a bike.'

× 'So that's why I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

✓ 'So that is why I did not have a bike when I was a child.'

'That's' is a contraction of 'that is' and is acceptable in speech; however, for clarity in correction, use 'that is why' or keep contraction. There is no subject-verb mismatch here, but to be explicit and consistent with formal tense and avoid contraction issues, expand to 'that is why I did not have a bike when I was a child.' Suggestion: use consistent negative past form 'did not.'

× 'Yes, bikes are very popular here in my country.'

✓ 'Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country.'

'Are' is present tense and correctly matches the general present situation. The sentence is grammatically correct, but 'bikes' can be replaced with 'bicycles' for slightly more formal register and remove unnecessary 'here'. Suggestion: 'Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country.'

× 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because, uh, I was not able to, uh, drive to drive a bike and my parents are not able to, uh, take a bike for me.'

✓ 'No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because I could not ride a bike and my parents were not able to buy one for me.'

Combine corrections: use consistent past tense ('did not', 'could not', 'were not able'), correct verb 'ride' for bicycle, and replace 'take a bike for me' with 'buy one for me' where 'one' correctly substitutes the noun and avoids repeating 'bike'. Also avoid contractions if aiming for clarity. Suggestion: use 'buy one for me' or 'get me one.'