Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and natural but too short and lacks supporting details. To improve, give a clear topic sentence then add 1–2 specific supporting details (where you learned, how old you were, feelings, or a brief memory). Use a linking word to connect ideas and keep within 3–5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents taught me how to ride when I was about six, and I learned in the park near our house. Because they were patient and encouraging, I felt confident quickly, and I still remember riding without training wheels for the first time.

제안: The answer expresses an opinion but is brief and general. Improve by giving specific reasons or examples and use linking words to make it coherent (e.g., 'because', 'for example', 'however'). Mention factors like climate, infrastructure, or cultural preferences to support your view.

예시: I don't think so because most people prefer motorcycles or cars for convenience and speed. For example, in my city the roads and long distances make cars more practical, and there is limited cycling infrastructure, so fewer people choose bikes.

× I don't think so. People nowadays use motorcycle or car in my country.

✓ I don't think so. People nowadays use motorcycles or cars in my country.

This sentence has two related errors: noun number (singular/plural) and subject-verb agreement with countable nouns. When referring to people in general using vehicles, use the plural forms 'motorcycles' and 'cars' to match the plural subject 'people'. Using singular 'motorcycle or car' sounds unnatural because it implies each person uses one unspecified singular vehicle; plural nouns are required for general statements. Suggestion: match noun number to the general plural subject by using 'motorcycles or cars'.