Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm (ví dụ: 'buy' thay vì 'bike') và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy nói rõ câu chủ đề ngay đầu (Yes/No + ngắn gọn), sau đó bổ sung 1-2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ai tặng, khi nào, cảm xúc, một kỉ niệm ngắn). Sử dụng cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ: “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me as a birthday present when I was about eight, and I used it to ride to school with my friends. I loved that bike because it made me feel independent.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me as a birthday present when I was about eight, and I rode it almost every day to visit my friends. I remember being so proud of it because it let me travel around the neighborhood on my own.

제안: Bạn trả lời đúng ý nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ 'use by' thay vì 'use bikes', 'UH' không cần thiết). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để giải thích sự thay đổi theo thời gian và đưa thêm chi tiết cụ thể (lý do tại sao thay đổi). Tránh ngắt quãng và sửa phát âm. Ví dụ: “Bikes were common in the past, but motorbikes are more popular now because they are faster and more convenient.”

예시: I think bikes used to be very popular, especially in the 1990s, when many people relied on them for short trips. However, nowadays motorbikes and cars are more common because they are faster and more convenient for commuting in busy cities.

× Absolutely. When I was a child I was given a buy from my father's gift and it also is my birthday, so I really appreciate that bike. Just for sure that I have a.

✓ Absolutely. When I was a child my father gave me a bike as a birthday present, so I really appreciated it.

The original sentence has multiple structural and word-choice errors. 'was given a buy from my father's gift' is incorrect word order and 'buy' is a misspelling of 'bike'. 'it also is my birthday' is awkward and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses a simple past active construction 'my father gave me a bike' which is natural for a past event, and 'as a birthday present' clarifies the reason. 'I really appreciated it' correctly refers back to the bike. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb-object order for past events and replace incorrect words (buy -> bike) and awkward clauses with concise phrases.

× Actually it's really depends on the period.

✓ Actually it really depends on the period.

The verb 'depends' should pair with subject 'it' without the auxiliary 'is'. The original 'it's really depends' mixes present simple and present continuous forms incorrectly. Use 'it really depends' for general present-tense statements. Suggestion: avoid combining 'it is' with a base-form verb plus -s; choose either 'it is' + adjective/adverb or 'it' + verb (depends).

× For instance in 1990 people always use by as a convenience transport, but now people are getting to a motorbike.

✓ For instance, in 1990 people always used bicycles as a convenient means of transport, but now people are switching to motorbikes.

Tense and word choice errors: describing a past habitual action requires past simple 'used' not present 'use'. 'by' is a misspelling of 'bike' or 'bicycle' and 'convenience transport' is unnatural; use 'convenient means of transport'. 'are getting to a motorbike' is ungrammatical—use 'are switching to motorbikes' to indicate change. Suggestion: match past tense for past periods, use correct nouns ('bicycle', 'motorbike') and natural collocations ('means of transport', 'switch to').

× UH is really popular in my country, Vietnam.

✓ Motorbikes are really popular in my country, Vietnam.

'UH' is a filler or transcription artifact and not a noun; the sentence lacks a clear subject. Replace with 'Motorbikes are really popular' to state the idea clearly. Also use plural 'motorbikes' to match general statement. Suggestion: remove filler words and provide a clear subject and verb for general facts.