Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Avoid confusing 'bike' and 'bicycle' with 'license' — children do not need a driving license for a bicycle. Use past simple for past facts and avoid mixing present tense. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a motorcycle when I was a child, but I did have a bicycle. It was very useful for getting to school and visiting friends, especially because public transport was limited in my neighborhood. Overall, my bicycle helped me be independent during my childhood.

제안: Begin with a clear opinion sentence and then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'in my opinion' or 'from my perspective'), singular/plural agreement, and linking words like 'because' and 'for example.' Keep answers concise and avoid repetition.

예시: From my perspective, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, people often use bikes to commute short distances when traffic is heavy, which saves time and money. Therefore, bicycles play an important role in everyday transport.

× No, on that time I don't have a bike because in my childhood I don't have a license.

✓ No, at that time I didn't have a bike because in my childhood I didn't have a license.

This sentence has tense errors and a preposition error. The context is past, so present simple 'do not have' should be past simple 'didn't have' (Past tense issue, ID 5). Also 'on that time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at that time' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Use consistent past tense for events in the past and the correct preposition 'at' with 'time'.

× I got a license after I'm in 18 plus, but I have a bicycle that helped me a lot to go anywhere.

✓ I got my license after I turned 18, and I had a bicycle that helped me a lot to go anywhere.

Multiple errors: 'I'm in 18 plus' is ungrammatical and mixes present with past; use past simple 'turned 18' to indicate age at that time (Past tense issue, ID 5). 'I have a bicycle' should be past 'I had a bicycle' to keep past-time consistency (Past tense issue, ID 5). Also replace 'after I'm in 18 plus' with 'after I turned 18' and change 'but' to 'and' for logical conjunction (Incorrect conjunction use, ID 16).

× To my perspect, to my perspective, bikes are very popular in my country because they help people to go anywhere easily.

✓ In my perspective, bikes are very popular in my country because they help people go anywhere easily.

'To my perspect' is a misspelling and wrong preposition. The common phrase is 'in my perspective' or better 'from my perspective' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Also remove the duplicated phrase. Suggest 'from my perspective' for more natural English.

× If the traffic are jammed in in the road, a bike can easily overcome that situation.

✓ If the traffic is jammed on the road, a bike can easily overcome that situation.

'Traffic' is an uncountable singular noun and requires singular verb 'is' (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Also correct preposition: 'on the road' not 'in the road' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Remove duplicate 'in'.

× So I think bike is very important.

✓ So I think bikes are very important.

The sentence uses singular 'bike' without an article; in this general statement use the plural 'bikes' to refer to the class of vehicles (Singular and plural issue, ID 1; Article errors, ID 22). Alternatively 'a bike is very important' would refer to a single bike. Use plural for general statements about all bikes.