Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and pronunciation (e.g., 'bike' not 'back'), use a clear topic sentence and follow with 2–3 concise supporting details. Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and correct tense (past simple) for childhood events. Also choose precise vocabulary (e.g., 'Hello Kitty' instead of 'hello kitties').

예시: Yes, I did. I had a pink bicycle with Hello Kitty stickers that my parents gave me for my fifth birthday. I loved it because it was small and easy to ride, so I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Make the answer more natural and add specific reasons or examples. Start with a clear topic sentence, then support it with 2–3 linked reasons using linking words like 'because', 'for example' or 'also'. Correct singular/plural agreement and phrasing (e.g., 'bikes are popular' and 'riding bikes').

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, I often see people riding bikes to markets or restaurants, and many cities have bike lanes that make cycling easier and safer.

× I have a back when I was a child and the back was very cute.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child and the bike was very cute.

The student used 'have' (present) but is speaking about the past; use past tense 'had'. Also 'back' is a spelling error for 'bike', and 'the back' should be 'the bike'. Use the correct noun and past tense to match 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: use 'had' for past possession and check spelling of 'bike'.

× It's pink.

✓ It was pink.

The speaker is describing the bike in the past ('when I was a child'). Using present 'is' is inconsistent. Change to past tense 'was' to maintain consistent past narration. Suggestion: keep tense consistent in the same time frame.

× I have hello kitties on it.

✓ It had Hello Kitties on it.

Again the speaker describes the bike in the past, so 'have' should be past 'had'. Also 'Hello Kitties' is a proper noun and should be capitalized as a phrase. Suggestion: use past tense when describing past possessions.

× It was my five years old birthday gift and I was very happy then.

✓ It was my fifth birthday gift, and I was very happy then.

'Five years old' is incorrect in this structure; use the ordinal 'fifth' for birthdays. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: use ordinal numbers for ages on birthdays ('fifth birthday').

× Definitely. I think it's popular in my country because when I go out for dinner or shopping, usually I see many people riding bike on the road for their.

✓ Definitely. I think bikes are popular in my country because when I go out for dinner or shopping, I usually see many people riding bikes on the road.

Multiple issues governed by subject-verb and noun agreement and sentence completeness: 'it's popular' refers to 'bikes' (plural), so use 'bikes are popular' or change subject to singular. 'Riding bike' is uncountable/incorrect; use 'riding bikes' or 'riding a bike'. The phrase 'for their' is incomplete and likely intended to be 'for themselves' or omitted; removing it yields a complete sentence. Also adverb placement: move 'usually' before the verb 'see' or after subject for natural flow. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb number match, use plural form for countable nouns, and complete phrases (remove or replace 'for their').