Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct verb forms and word order (e.g., 'couldn't afford', 'borrowed from friends', 'learn to ride'). Use linking words like 'so' or 'but' appropriately and keep the answer to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. Instead, I often borrowed a bike from my friends to learn to ride. As a result, I only learned to ride when I was older.

제안: Make the response clearer and more relevant. Begin with a direct statement (Yes/No). Then give specific reasons with correct vocabulary (e.g., 'popular because they are cheap, good for short trips, and environmentally friendly'). Avoid unclear phrases like 'courageous about the their onboarding' and 'love trading'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas, and keep the answer to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or to run errands, especially in crowded city areas.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child, my family was not afford bicycle and when I was late to ride it I borrowed to my friends so.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family could not afford a bicycle, and when I wanted to ride one I borrowed one from my friends.

Multiple past-tense and related grammatical problems: 'was not afford' is incorrect verb usage in past tense; use 'could not afford' to express inability in the past. 'bicycle' needs an article 'a bicycle'. 'when I was late to ride it' is unclear and ungrammatical for the intended meaning; use 'when I wanted to ride one' to show desire in the past. 'I borrowed to my friends' uses the wrong preposition and lacks the object; correct form is 'I borrowed one from my friends'. Suggestions: use appropriate past-tense modal 'could' for ability/inability, include articles before singular count nouns, use 'from' with 'borrow', and express intent with 'wanted' or 'needed' when referring to past desire or occasions.

× Yeah, I think that's so popular in my country just because of some people are courageous about the their onboarding and love trading.

✓ Yeah, I think they're very popular in my country, because some people are enthusiastic about riding them and enjoy cycling.

Pronoun and word-choice issues: 'that's so popular' mismatches number with 'bikes' (plural) — use 'they're' or 'they are' (subject-verb agreement/number). 'so' is colloquial; 'very' is more neutral. 'because of' followed by a clause should not include 'of' when starting a clause; restructure to 'because some people...'. 'the their onboarding' mixes definite article and possessive pronoun and uses the wrong noun 'onboarding' (which means joining a company). Replace with 'enthusiastic about riding them' or 'about cycling'. 'love trading' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'love riding' or 'enjoy cycling'. Suggestions: match pronouns and verbs in number, avoid redundant articles with possessives, choose correct vocabulary ('ride','cycle','enthusiastic') and keep causal connectors simple ('because').