Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify tense and meaning, use a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details, avoid redundancy and odd phrases. Keep answers natural (1–3 sentences) and use linking words when expanding. For example, say when you had the bike, describe one clear feature, and explain why you liked it.

예시: Yes, I had several bikes as a child, but my favorite was a small red one with two seats. I liked it because it was lightweight, so I could ride fast, and the extra seat let me give my little sister a ride around the neighborhood.

제안: Answer directly with a clear opinion, provide specific reasons and link them logically. Use correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and avoid fillers like “umm.” Mention evidence or examples (traffic, infrastructure, safety) to support your view.

예시: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country because roads are dominated by cars and motorcycles, which makes cycling unsafe. In addition, there are few dedicated bike lanes, so many people prefer motorized transport for convenience and safety.

× So I have many buy but most likely I love the red one with a 2 view.

✓ So I had many bikes but I most liked the red one with a two‑wheel view.

Errors: 'have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'when you were a child' (Present/Past tense mismatch -> Present tense issue and Past tense issue but limited to list: use past tense). 'many buy' is incorrect word choice and noun form; 'buy' should be the noun 'bikes' (singular/plural and word choice). 'most likely I love' should be past preference 'I most liked' to match past context. 'a 2 view' is unclear; likely intended 'two‑wheel' or 'two‑wheel design'—use words not numerals in this context and correct noun. Suggestion: use 'I had many bikes, but I liked the red one best because it was a two‑wheeler.' Note: keep verb tense consistent and choose correct noun forms.

× I think it's suitable for me to ride fast and go anywhere else whatever I want.

✓ I think it was suitable for me to ride fast and go anywhere I wanted.

Errors: tense mismatch with previous past context — use past 'was' and 'wanted'. 'Go anywhere else whatever I want' is unidiomatic: 'anywhere I wanted' expresses ability in the past. 'Else' and 'whatever' are redundant here. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use natural phrasing: 'ride fast and go anywhere I wanted.'

× In my country bike is not popular because the traffic on the road is have many cars and motorcycle UMM is not suitable for a bike to ride in this country.

✓ In my country, bikes are not popular because the roads have many cars and motorcycles, so it is not suitable to ride a bike here.

Errors: 'bike is not popular' — singular subject with general meaning requires plural 'bikes are' (subject-verb agreement). 'the traffic on the road is have many cars and motorcycle' mixes 'is' with 'have' (incorrect verb forms) and uses singular 'motorcycle'; correct form: 'roads have many cars and motorcycles.' 'UMM' is filler and should be removed. 'is not suitable for a bike to ride in this country' is awkward; better: 'it is not suitable to ride a bike here.' Suggestion: use plural for general statements, ensure verbs agree with subjects, and restructure sentence for clarity.