Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and provide a clearer, slightly longer response (1–3 sentences). Start with a direct topic sentence, correct tense and article use, and add a brief specific detail (e.g., who gave it to you or how you used it). Use linking words only if adding extra detail.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a Splendor Plus that my father bought for me when I was ten, and I used it every day to ride to school and visit friends.

제안: Make sentences grammatically consistent and more natural. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add two concise supporting reasons with specific examples. Use linking words like 'because' or 'also' to connect ideas and correct pronoun/number agreement (e.g., 'they are regularly used by many workers').

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap to maintain and fuel-efficient. Also, many working-class people rely on motorcycles and scooters to commute short distances and avoid traffic.

× Definitely when I was a child. I have Splendor plus bike.

✓ Definitely. When I was a child, I had a Splendor Plus bike.

Problems: present tense 'have' is incorrect for a past-time statement (Past tense issue, ID 5) and missing article before a specific bike model ('a' article error, ID 22). Use past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a child'. Include the indefinite article 'a' before 'Splendor Plus bike' because the noun is singular and not previously mentioned. Also add a comma after the introductory time phrase for clarity and capitalize the model name correctly. Suggestion: For past events, use past simple verbs (I had). Include appropriate articles before singular countable nouns (a/an/the).

× Definitely. Bikes are popular in my country due to their low maintenance and their fuel efficiency.

✓ Definitely. Bikes are popular in my country because they require low maintenance and are fuel-efficient.

Problems: phrasing 'due to their low maintenance' is awkward and 'their' repetition is unnecessary (Incorrect use of pronouns/adjectives, ID 12 and 13). Also 'fuel efficiency' as a noun phrase is better expressed as the adjective 'fuel-efficient' or the verb construction 'are fuel-efficient' to describe bikes (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, ID 13). Use 'because they require low maintenance' to show reason clearly and avoid ambiguous possessive pronouns. Suggestion: Prefer 'because' for reasons and use clear verb phrases or adjectives to describe characteristics: 'require low maintenance' or 'are fuel-efficient.'

× Furthermore, it is regularly used by many people who are in a working job background.

✓ Furthermore, they are regularly used by many people who work in the formal workforce.

Problems: The subject 'Bikes' is plural, but the sentence uses singular 'it' and 'is' (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27 and Singular/plural issue ID 1). The phrase 'working job background' is ungrammatical and awkward (Sentence structure/word choice, ID 26 and Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, ID 13). Replace 'it' with 'they' and 'is' with 'are' to match the plural subject. Use 'people who work in the formal workforce' or 'people who have jobs' to express the intended meaning. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and use natural collocations like 'work in the formal workforce' or simply 'working people'.