Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer merely repeated the question instead of responding. For a good Part 1 reply, give a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (age, who gave it to you, where you rode it, or a brief memory). Keep it natural, 1–4 sentences, and use linking words if you add details (for example: "and", "so", "when").

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was six, and I used to ride it to the park near our house every weekend. Riding with my friends helped me learn balance quickly, so I became quite confident on two wheels.

제안: Your answer gives a short opinion but is vague and contains grammatical errors. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar (e.g., "part of our childhood" or "part of daily life") and linking words like "because" or "for example". Keep to a maximum of about 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, children often ride bikes to school or to visit friends, and adults use them for commuting in busy neighborhoods. As a result, you can see bike lanes and families cycling regularly on weekends.

× Well, I can say yes, it's popular in our country.

✓ Well, I would say yes; they're popular in our country.

The original sentence uses 'it's' (it is) to refer to 'bikes', which is plural. This is a pronoun reference error. Replace 'it's' with 'they're' to match the plural noun 'bikes'. Also 'I can say' is more natural as 'I would say' in this context, and use a semicolon or conjunction for smoother sentence flow.

× It's because it's part of our child too.

✓ That's because they are part of our childhood too.

The original has two pronoun and word choice problems: 'It's' (it is) is used incorrectly for the plural 'bikes', and 'child' is the wrong noun; the intended meaning is 'childhood' (the period of being a child). Correct to 'That's because they are part of our childhood too.' This matches plural agreement and uses the correct noun. Additionally, 'That's' (That is) clarifies the causal link more naturally.