Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep the answer concise and directly address the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words and grammar mistakes (e.g., double negatives and incorrect modal forms). Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly and keep sentence count to 2–3. For example, correct the double negative and simplify: "No, I didn't. I never had the chance to learn because there was no one to teach me."

예시: No, I didn't. I never learned to ride as a child because there was no one available to teach me, so I never owned a bike.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons linked logically. Remove fillers and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, redundant phrases). Use linking words like "because" and "also" to connect ideas. Provide a small example or contrast to make your point more concrete. Aim for 2–3 sentences total.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and often faster than cars in heavy traffic. For example, many commuters use bicycles to reach crowded markets or public transport stations quickly.

× No, actually I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't have the opportunity to ride by myself and no one can could not have like chance to teach me.

✓ No, actually I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't have the opportunity to ride by myself and no one could teach me.

The original sentence mixes modal verbs and tenses ('can could not have like chance'), which is incorrect. Use the past modal 'could' to indicate past ability/possibility and remove extra words. Also simplify 'have like chance to teach me' to 'teach me'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and avoid stacking modals or filler words.

× So that's why I didn't have.

✓ So that's why I didn't have one.

The sentence lacks a clear object; 'didn't have' needs an object (a bike). Adding 'one' clarifies meaning. Alternatively, repeat 'a bike' for clarity. Maintain past tense.

× Yes, obviously, I think bikes are really popular, is used by masses, so umm, because they're fast and the they have a really umm, they are available for people who don't have a car.

✓ Yes, obviously. I think bikes are really popular and are used by many people because they're fast and available for people who don't have a car.

The original has subject-verb agreement and pronoun redundancy issues: 'bikes ... is used' is incorrect; use plural verb 'are used'. Phrases like 'the they have a really umm' are redundant and ungrammatical. Replace 'masses' with 'many people' for naturalness. Remove filler words and ensure the verbs agree with the plural subject 'bikes'.