Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and add one specific detail to make the answer more natural and complete. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief supporting detail and a linking word to show cause or contrast. Avoid repeating tense forms unnecessarily (e.g., “used to” and “when I was 6” is fine but simplify the reason).

예시: Yes — I had a small red bike when I was six. I practiced riding it around my neighborhood every day, but I wasn’t very skilled at first because I hadn’t had much practice.

제안: Make the response more natural by using a clear topic sentence followed by a specific reason and an example. Use linking words (however, because, for example) and avoid filler sounds. Be concise and correct repetition (e.g., “on the road” repeated).

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country; however, many people avoid riding on busy roads because it can be dangerous. For example, cyclists often use bike paths or sidewalks instead to stay safe.

× I used to ride my bike around my house when I was 6, but I wasn't very good at it because I hadn't practiced enough.

✓ I used to ride my bike around my house when I was six, but I wasn't very good at it because I hadn't practiced enough.

This sentence has no error with past participle form; however, a minor style issue is numeric formatting: numbers under 10 are usually written as words in formal writing. No grammatical correction required for verb forms. Suggest writing 'six' instead of '6' for consistency and formality.

× I think bikes are popular in my country, but many people don't usually ride a bike on the road because it can cause, uh, accident on the road.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country, but many people don't usually ride a bike on the road because it can cause an accident.

The phrase 'cause accident' requires the indefinite article 'an' before the singular countable noun 'accident'. Also, the repeated phrase 'on the road' is redundant; removing the second instance improves clarity. Finally, filler 'uh' should be omitted in written responses. Suggest using 'an accident' and avoid unnecessary repetition.