Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify meaning and use correct vocabulary, grammar and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. say you had a bike), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors (e.g. "life" → "bike", verb tense, articles, prepositions) and avoid run-on sentences. Aim for 2–4 short, connected sentences and be specific about what you did while learning.

예시: Yes. I got my first bike when I was six years old. I practiced riding it every day for about three months until I felt confident. By the end of the summer I could ride without training wheels and I loved cycling around my neighborhood.

제안: Provide a clear direct answer then give organized supporting reasons with linking words. Use correct nouns and avoid repetition. Mention specific groups who use bikes and specific purposes (commuting, exercise, cost-saving). Use 2–3 concise sentences and appropriate vocabulary (e.g. "popular", "commuting", "students", "delivery riders").

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many students and people who cannot afford cars use bicycles to commute to school or work. In addition, delivery riders often use bikes because they are cheap and easy to park.

× I got my first life when I was six years old and I remember I practiced hard to ride a bicycle it too clean it to face for three months.

✓ I got my first bike when I was six years old, and I remember I practised hard to learn to ride a bicycle; it took me about three months.

The student used incorrect words and past-tense verb forms. 'Got' is OK but 'life' is a lexical error and should be 'bike'. 'Practiced hard to ride a bicycle' is understandable but more natural is 'practised hard to learn to ride a bicycle.' 'It too clean it to face' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is 'it took me about three months.' Use past tense 'took' for completed action. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary ('bike'), use 'learn to ride' for the process, and use past simple 'took' for duration of a past completed process. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× Yes, I will there there are lots of people who use Spike, for example, people who cannot drive or people like people, young people, people can use bike as a way as a way to go to the place where wherever they want and also give you.

✓ Yes, there are lots of people who use bikes; for example, people who cannot drive, young people, and others can use a bike as a way to go wherever they want, and it is also cheap and convenient.

The sentence contains several tense and lexical problems. 'I will there there are' incorrectly mixes future and present; the correct simple present is 'there are' to state a general fact. 'Use Spike' seems to be a wrong word; 'use bikes' fits context. Redundant and unclear phrases like 'people like people, young people, people can use bike as a way as a way to go to the place where wherever they want' need rephrasing: list groups (people who cannot drive, young people) and use 'use a bike as a way to go wherever they want.' Also add a plausible benefit 'it is also cheap and convenient' to finish the thought. Suggestions: use simple present for general truths, remove repetitions, choose correct nouns ('bikes'), and keep parallel lists concise. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)