Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题，未作任何回应。根据评分规则，应该直接回答问题并补充必要的细节。改进要点：1) 直接给出主题句（有/没有以及何时）。2) 使用1–2个具体细节（比如谁买的、骑行的频率或有什么记忆）。3) 使用连接词使句子连贯，如“because”、“so”、“when”。请保持不超过5个句子。

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon. Because I practiced a lot, I learned to ride without training wheels within a week, which made me very proud.

제안: 你的回答同样只是重复了问题，没有给出观点或支持细节。改进要点：1) 先直接表明观点（流行/不流行/部分流行）。2) 提供1–2个具体原因或例子（如通勤、健身、共享单车）。3) 使用连接词如“because”、“for example”来组织内容，且保持简洁。

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in big cities the bike-sharing programs are widely used, and in smaller towns people often ride bikes to the market or school.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子本身作为疑问句没有语法错误，但考生直接重复听到的考官问题，未给出回答。根据上下文，应以肯定或否定回答并提供补充信息。建议用简单过去时回答，如“Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”或“No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.”并可加一两句细节。

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

原句为考官提问，考生重复问题而没有作答。需要用陈述句表达观点。建议使用一般现在时回答，如“Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.”或“No, I don’t think they’re very popular.”并给出理由。