Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and fluency: use correct tense and sentence structure, remove repetition, and give one or two specific supporting details. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add a linked detail using a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, change 'I like a bike when I I was a child' to 'I had a bike when I was a child.' Also replace 'quite safety' with 'quite safe.'

예시: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. It was my main way to get around the neighborhood because it was cheap and convenient. I also enjoyed riding with friends on weekends, which helped me stay active.

제안: Make the response more direct and organized: start with a clear opinion (yes/no/partly) and then support it with specific reasons and examples. Avoid repeating words and filler sounds. Use linking words like 'however', 'because', or 'therefore' to connect ideas. Correct phrasing: 'In my country, many people use motorbikes and cars because they are convenient.'

예시: I think bikes are less popular in my country. Many people prefer motorbikes and cars because they are faster and more convenient for longer distances. However, bicycles are still common in some neighborhoods for short trips and among people who want exercise or to save money.

× I like a bike when I I was a child because it's very convenient and it's quite safety for me.

✓ I liked bikes when I was a child because they were very convenient and quite safe for me.

Errors: tense and agreement with time expression 'when I was a child' requires past tense (present tense 'like' wrong) so use 'liked' (Grammar Problem Type 6: Present tense issue and 5: Past tense issue). 'a bike' is inappropriate when speaking generally about preference—use plural 'bikes' (Grammar Problem Type 1: Singular and plural issue). Duplicate word 'I I' is a typing error (Sentence structure error, Type 26). Pronoun and verb agreement: 'it's very convenient' refers to 'bikes', plural, so use 'they were' and 'safe' is an adjective, not 'safety' (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, Type 13). Suggestions: use past tense for past habits ('I liked'), use plural when speaking generally ('bikes' and 'they'), remove duplicated word, and use adjective 'safe' rather than noun 'safety'.

× I'm not sure in my country, my city, my citizen in my country, uh usually go to by motorbike and car is so convenient and umm easy to go to another location.

✓ I'm not sure about my whole country, but in my city most people usually go by motorbike or car because these are convenient and make it easy to get to other places.

Errors: preposition and connector problems ('not sure in my country' should be 'not sure about my country' — Incorrect use of prepositions, Type 11). 'my citizen in my country' is ungrammatical and unclear; correct phrase is 'most people' or 'most citizens' (Incorrect use of pronouns/nouns, Type 12). 'go to by motorbike' misorders verb and preposition; correct is 'go by motorbike' (Verb + preposition order, Type 11). 'car is so convenient and umm easy to go to another location' has subject-verb agreement and article issues: talk about 'car' and 'motorbike' generally, so use plural or 'these' (Subject-verb agreement/Article errors, Types 27 and 22). Also 'another location' is awkward; use 'other places' or 'other locations' (Incorrect word choice). Suggestions: use 'about' after 'sure', replace unclear phrase with 'most people', use 'go by' for transport, coordinate nouns with plural pronoun 'these' and keep consistent plural forms, and simplify to 'other places'.