Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır, ancak akıcılık ve cümle yapısı geliştirilebilir. Kısa, tekrar eden ifadelerden kaçının ve daha doğal bir başlangıç cümlesi kullanın. Örneğin konuyu daha akıcı bağlamak için tek bir tam cümle kurun ve gerekirse kısa bir destekleyici detay ekleyin (ör. ne tür bir bisikletti veya nerede sürdüğünüz).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that I often rode around the neighborhood after school.

제안: Cevapta dilbilgisi hataları ve akıcılık sorunları var; ayrıca fikir net ama daha fazla spesifik örnek ve bağlaç kullanımı gerekiyor. Olumsuz ifadeyi doğru kurun, bağlaçlarla mantığı güçlendirin ve somut örnekler verin (ör. trafik, hava koşulları, altyapı).

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Although there are several urban mobility projects, most people prefer cars because of heavy traffic and limited cycle lanes, so biking is still mainly a leisure activity.

× Yes, I did. When I was a child. I had a bike.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had a bike.

The original response contains a sentence fragment 'When I was a child.' which is not a complete sentence. Combine the fragment with the following sentence using a comma to form one complete sentence: 'When I was a child, I had a bike.' This ensures proper sentence structure and clear connection between the time clause and the main clause. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by attaching dependent clauses to independent clauses.

× I think it writes are not popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country.

The phrase 'it writes' is incorrect and appears to be a mistranslation or typographical error. The intended subject is 'bikes.' Use the correct noun 'bikes' as the subject of the sentence. Suggestion: check that the subject matches the topic and avoid accidental word substitutions.

× Actually there are many projects for urban mobility, but people not used to a bicycle for transportation or sports activities.

✓ Actually, there are many projects for urban mobility, but people are not used to using bicycles for transportation or sports activities.

This sentence has multiple issues: missing auxiliary verb for the passive or progressive construction and incorrect verb form. 'people not used to a bicycle' should be 'people are not used to using bicycles' or 'people are not accustomed to using bicycles.' Also plural 'bicycles' fits general reference. Suggestion: include the appropriate auxiliary verb ('are') and use the gerund 'using' after 'used to' when describing habitual actions. Also add a comma after 'Actually' for clarity.