Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use past tense and linking words to make it coherent. Keep it natural and avoid repeating the examiner's words. For example, state whether you had a bike, mention when or how you used it, and give a short reason or memory.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle from about age six, and I rode it to visit friends in the neighborhood. Because the area was quiet and safe, I spent most afternoons practicing and learning new tricks.

제안: Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Use plural form 'bikes' and provide examples of where and why they are popular (e.g., commuting, recreation). Keep to at most four sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g., popular, common, widely used).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For instance, in cities you often see commuters cycling to work, and in parks families ride bikes at weekends. Moreover, recent investments in bike lanes have made cycling safer and more attractive.

× Yes, I think bike is popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

Student omitted the plural noun or an article. The question asks generally about bicycles in the country, so use the plural 'bikes' (or 'the bike' with appropriate meaning). Also maintain subject-verb agreement with 'are'. Suggestion: use 'bikes are' for general statements about a category (e.g., 'Bikes are popular here').