Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 発音と文法の修正に集中しましょう。過去の出来事を述べる際は過去形を使い、年齢を言うときは“when I was ten”のように表現します。冗長な語（“I”の重複）を避け、文を自然に保ちます。さらに、回答を少し詳しくして具体性を加えると高得点につながります。例えばいつ、どんな自転車だったか、誰からもらったか、どのくらい乗っていたか等を短く付け加えましょう。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was ten. It was a red mountain bike that my parents bought me, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood every day.

제안: 語順と冠詞、語彙の使い方を直しましょう。意見を述べるときは“Yes, I think”の後に完全な文を続け、理由や具体例を加えると説得力が増します。接続詞を使って理由（because）や例（for example）を付けると会話が自然になります。例えば利用場面（通勤、通学、レジャー）やインフラ（自転車道、駐輪場）について一文加えてください。

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in Japan because many people use them for commuting and shopping. For example, students often ride to school and cities have plenty of bike parking spaces.

× I had a bike when I I'm 10.

✓ I had a bike when I was 10.

This sentence mixes past ('had') with an incorrect present form 'I'm 10'. The time reference 'when I was 10' requires past tense 'was'. Change 'I'm' to 'was' to match the past time reference and maintain subject-verb agreement. Also remove the extra 'I' before 'I'm'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past events (e.g., 'I had a bike when I was 10').

× Yes, I think popular bike in Japan.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in Japan.

The original sentence lacks a verb and incorrect noun form. 'Think' needs a clause with a subject and verb ('bikes are popular'). Use plural 'bikes' to match the general statement and include the verb 'are' to form a complete clause. Suggestion: Use a full clause after verbs like 'think' (subject + verb), e.g., 'I think bikes are popular in Japan').