Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the tense and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one short supporting detail. Avoid repeating obvious words like “of course.” Use past tense (“had”) and a linking phrase if you expand.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon.

제안: Be more specific and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Replace vague phrase “from my perspective” with a direct statement, use plural/singular agreement, and explain one clear reason with an example. Use linking words like “because” or “mainly because.”

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, mainly because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see many commuters and students choosing bicycles to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, of course, when I was a kid, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, of course, when I was a kid, I had a bike.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a kid'), so the verb should be in the past tense. Using present tense 'have' is inconsistent with the time reference. Suggestion: use past simple 'had' for completed actions or states in the past. Also consider removing the comma for smoother flow: 'Yes, of course. When I was a kid, I had a bike.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× From my perspective, bikes are very popular in my country. Uh, the main reason is that motor vlogging are very growing in my country.

✓ From my perspective, bikes are very popular in my country. The main reason is that motor vlogging is growing rapidly in my country.

There are two issues: (1) 'motor vlogging' is treated as a singular activity or concept, so the verb should be singular 'is' rather than plural 'are' (subject-verb agreement). (2) The phrase 'very growing' is ungrammatical; use 'growing rapidly' or 'becoming very popular' to describe an increasing trend. Suggestion: use 'is growing rapidly' or 'is becoming very popular' for clear, natural expression. Grammar problem type ID:27