Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp/ cấu trúc. Nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tuổi khi có xe, ai tặng, kỷ niệm liên quan). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I surely as many normal child"; dùng thì và đại từ đúng, giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu. Thực hành nối ý bằng các liên từ đơn giản như "and", "because" hoặc "when" để mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I rode it to school every day. I remember learning to balance on our quiet street, which gave me a lot of confidence.

제안: Câu trả lời lộn xộn, nhiều tiếng ngập ngừng và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Nên mở đầu bằng câu khẳng định rõ ràng (Yes/No + brief reason), sau đó bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ở thành phố vs nông thôn, các mục đích sử dụng: đi làm, giải trí). Sử dụng liên từ như "because" hoặc "however" để nối ý, tránh lặp từ và sửa phát âm/ cấu trúc như "most of your calls" → "most people".

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and practical. Many people use them for short trips in the city, while others ride for exercise or leisure on weekends.

× Well, I surely as many normal child.

✓ Well, I was like many normal children.

The original sentence uses incorrect word order and word choice. 'Surely as many normal child' is ungrammatical. Use 'was' for past tense (verb 'to be') and plural 'children' for 'many'. 'Like' correctly compares to other children. Suggestion: say 'I was like many normal children' or 'I was a typical child.'

× I used to have a bike when I was a child and I think this is one of the most important things in my childhood.

✓ I used to have a bike when I was a child, and I think it was one of the most important things in my childhood.

Mixing present tense 'think' with past reference 'one of the most important things in my childhood' can be acceptable, but better consistency uses past 'was' to refer to childhood. Use comma before conjunction joining clauses. Suggestion: 'I used to have a bike when I was a child, and I think it was one of the most important things from my childhood.'

× Well, umm, when is when it comes to a bike, I would say that in my country it is one of the most popular, most of your calls in the street and I think if people want to move far, uh.

✓ Well, when it comes to bikes, I would say that they are very popular in my country. You can see many of them on the streets, and people often use bikes for short trips but use other transport when they want to travel far.

The original sentence has repetitive phrase 'when is when', incorrect pronoun usage 'your calls', missing plural agreement, and incomplete clause at the end. Correct structure: 'when it comes to bikes' and plural subject 'they are'. Replace 'most of your calls' with 'many of them' and complete the thought about long-distance travel. Suggestion: practice forming clear independent clauses and check subject-verb agreement and pronoun references.'