Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1 you should answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, relevant and under five sentences. For example, state whether you had a bike, give a short reason or memory, and perhaps contrast with now.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to go to my friend’s house and explore the neighborhood, which helped me gain confidence and independence. Nowadays I rarely ride because I live farther from my friends and use public transport.

제안: Your answer gives a basic opinion but has grammatical errors and vague phrasing. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, more specific reasons or examples, and linking words (for example, because, also). Use correct expressions (e.g., ‘older people’ not ‘older ones’, ‘leg muscles’ not ‘lower muscles’). Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among older people. For example, many seniors cycle in parks because it’s low-impact exercise that helps strengthen their leg muscles and keeps them active. Additionally, cycling is becoming more common among young people for short trips because it’s cheap and eco-friendly.

× Yes, mostly of the older ones do ride the bike around here and they do improve our local or our lower muscles.

✓ Yes, most of the older people ride bikes around here, and it helps strengthen our lower-body muscles.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement and phrasing issues. 'Mostly of the older ones do ride' is ungrammatical; use 'most of the older people ride' for correct noun phrase and simple present tense for habitual actions. 'Ride the bike' should be pluralized to 'ride bikes' or 'ride a bike' depending on meaning; here general plural is appropriate. 'They do improve our local or our lower muscles' has unclear pronoun reference and word choice; replace with 'it helps strengthen our lower-body muscles' to refer to cycling in general and use correct collocation 'lower-body muscles.' Use simple present 'ride' rather than auxiliary 'do ride' unless for emphasis; avoid unnecessary 'do.'

× So it's a good opportunity to have our exercise using bikes.

✓ So it's a good opportunity to get exercise by using bikes.

The original sentence has awkward structure and preposition use. 'Have our exercise' is unnatural; use 'get exercise' or 'get some exercise.' 'Using bikes' should be connected with a preposition phrase 'by using bikes' to show means. The correction keeps the simple present context and clarifies the method of exercising.