Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp nhỏ, dùng cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn và thêm một câu chi tiết ngắn để phong phú thông tin. Tránh nói quá nhiều câu đơn có cấu trúc giống nhau; bạn có thể kết hợp hoặc dùng từ nối. Ngoài ra chú ý chia động từ và dấu câu (ví dụ: “on my own” đúng nhưng có thể nói “by myself”).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was in secondary school, and I used it to cycle to school every day by myself. It was a simple, sturdy bike that I kept for several years, which made my commute quick and enjoyable.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng mắc lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng và nối câu kém logic. Bạn nên sửa lỗi từ bị viết sai (‘cards’ → ‘cars’), sắp xếp lại câu để mạch lạc, dùng từ nối hợp lý (e.g. 'although', 'however', 'for short distances') và cung cấp một ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể để minh họa quan điểm của bạn.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are still quite popular. Although there are many cars on the roads now, people often choose bikes for short distances because they are cheaper and easier to park. For example, many students and office workers cycle to nearby shops or bus stops to save time.

× even though nowadays there are a lot of cards on the street

✓ even though nowadays there are a lot of cars on the street

The student wrote 'cards' but the intended noun is 'cars' (vehicles). This is a spelling error causing a wrong word; it should be 'cars' in plural because multiple vehicles are meant. Suggestion: check spelling and ensure the correct noun for vehicles is 'car' and use plural 'cars' when referring to many vehicles.

× but I think people prefer bike to carts or motorbikes when commuting for a short.

✓ but I think people prefer bikes to cars or motorbikes when commuting for short distances.

Problems: 'prefer bike' needs plural 'bikes' after 'prefer' when speaking generally; 'carts' is incorrect word for 'cars'; 'for a short.' is incomplete and should be 'for short distances'. Also 'prefer X to Y' requires parallel nouns. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general preferences ('bikes', 'cars') and complete the phrase with 'short distances'.

× Distant.

✓ for short distances.

The isolated word 'Distant.' is a sentence fragment and does not fit. It should be attached to the previous clause as 'for short distances' to complete the meaning. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments; ensure modifiers are connected to the clause they modify.