Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer in the past tense (since the question asks about your childhood). Keep it concise (1–2 sentences), explain briefly why you didn't have one, and avoid irrelevant words. Use clear linking if you add a reason.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I couldn't have one because I was too young and my parents preferred I learn to ride later for safety reasons.

제안: Answer directly and use present tense for general facts. Organize supporting details with linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') and avoid repetition. Provide one or two specific reasons or examples to make your answer convincing.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many areas attract tourists who enjoy scenic rides. For example, there are several coastal and mountain routes where locals and visitors rent motorcycles and bicycles for sightseeing.

× No, I don't have a bike at my Salute because I don't have a license that I'm because I'm underage.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike at my hometown because I didn't have a license; I was underage.

Errors: present tense 'don't have' used with past time 'when you were a child' and awkward phrase 'at my Salute'. Also redundant clause 'that I'm because I'm underage'. Correction changes verbs to past tense to match the question context ('didn't have', 'didn't have a license', 'was underage') and replaces 'Salute' with 'hometown' assuming intended meaning. Suggestion: Use past simple for past habits or states and avoid redundant clauses; restructure sentences with a semicolon or conjunction for clarity.

× Yes, in my country bike was very popular because my country is a tourist place.

✓ Yes, in my country bikes are very popular because it is a tourist destination.

Errors: mixed tenses and singular/plural mismatch. 'Bike was very popular' mixes past with present context; the examiner asked generally, so present simple is appropriate. Use plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. Also 'tourist place' is better phrased 'tourist destination' and avoid repeating 'my country'. Suggestion: Use present simple and plural nouns for general facts and use concise nouns for clarity.

× That's why there there are very adventurous, adventurous roads in our country.

✓ That's why there are very adventurous roads in our country.

Errors: duplicated word 'there' and repeated adjective 'adventurous'. Remove the duplicate words. Suggestion: Proofread for accidental repetition and keep adjective use concise; if stronger emphasis is needed, use one adjective or a modifier like 'quite adventurous'.

× So that's why there are bikes. It's popular in my country.

✓ So that's why bikes are popular in my country.

Errors: split sentence causes awkward phrasing and 'It's popular' lacks a clear subject (what is 'it'?). Combine into one sentence and use plural subject 'bikes' with plural verb 'are' for agreement. Suggestion: Combine related ideas into a single sentence and ensure the pronoun refers clearly to the noun.