Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fragments and redundant phrases. For example, start with "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child." Then explain briefly what it looked like and what happened to it using a linking word (e.g., "but" or "however").

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small black bicycle with a bell and a basket, but my parents sold it when I outgrew it.

제안: Provide a clear opinion with a short reason and, if possible, a specific example. Use a topic sentence and add one supporting detail with a linking word like "because" or "for example" to make your answer coherent and informative.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise; for example, you often see students and delivery workers cycling in cities.

× Yeah, I used to have this bike which it got sold later.

✓ Yeah, I used to have this bike, but it was sold later.

The original sentence incorrectly uses a relative clause with an extra pronoun 'it' ('which it got sold'), causing redundancy and ungrammatical structure. Use a coordinating conjunction or a correct relative clause without the extra pronoun. Suggestion: replace 'which it got sold later' with 'but it was sold later' or 'which was sold later'.

× It was a black one my.

✓ It was a black one of mine.

The original sentence ends with 'my', which is the possessive adjective and cannot stand alone. The correct possessive pronoun is 'mine' or use the structure 'one of mine'. Alternatively, place the possessive adjective before the noun: 'my black one' or better: 'It was a black bike of mine.'

× Yeah.

✓ Yes, I think so.

A one-word response 'Yeah' is grammatically acceptable in casual speech but may be too short for a test answer. Provide a fuller sentence that fits the question: for example, 'Yes, I think so' or 'Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.' This improves clarity and completeness.