Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, tense and expand slightly. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and keep it under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or rode public transport because my family lived far from the school. However, I remember borrowing a neighbour's bike sometimes, which felt exciting.

제안: Correct the repetition and make the answer more specific. Start with a direct statement, then give reasons or examples using linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make it more informative and natural.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and shared-bike services, and in rural areas people often ride bikes for daily errands.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question uses past tense 'Did you have', so the answer must also be in past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense and does not agree with the past auxiliary 'did'. Use 'didn't' + base verb: 'I didn't' (short for 'I did not have'). Suggestion: Match the tense of the question; use 'did' + base verb for past simple answers (e.g., 'No, I didn't' or 'No, I didn't have one').

× Yes, bikes are popular in in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country.

There is a duplicated preposition 'in in' which is redundant and incorrect. Use a single preposition 'in' before the noun phrase 'our country'. Suggestion: Proofread for repeated words and ensure only one preposition appears (e.g., 'in our country' or 'throughout our country').