Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use correct verb forms (e.g., "learned" or "learn to ride"), reduce redundancy, and keep answers concise (maximum 3–4 sentences). Add a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Pronoun clarity and small word choices ("a gift from my mother", "useful skill") will make the answer more natural.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child; my mother gave it to me as a birthday present. I learned to ride it in the park nearby, which helped me become independent. Because of that, I often use a bike for short trips and errands now.

제안: Make the response more natural and specific: begin with a clear opinion, then give two concrete reasons with linking words (e.g., "Firstly", "For example"). Use more appropriate vocabulary ("popular", "common", "convenient", "commute") and correct collocations ("commute to work", "parks and other places"). Keep sentences shorter and avoid awkward phrases like "work on the street" and "convenient measure."

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, they are a cheap and convenient way to commute, especially in crowded cities. For example, many people ride to work or to parks because bikes save time and parking costs.

× Yes, of course I had a bike as a gift from my mom and I learn how to ride and I say ride.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike as a gift from my mom and I learned how to ride; I mean, riding a bicycle is a useful skill in my daily life and I could go where I wanted by bike.

The student mixes past and present forms. 'I had' is past, so 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). Also 'I say ride' is a spoken clarification but should be rewritten for clarity as 'I mean, riding...'. 'Can go' should be shifted to past 'could go' to remain consistent with the past time frame 'when you were a child'. Use of past tense maintains temporal consistency and improves clarity.

× Definitely, as long as you work on the street you can see many people ride their bikes because it's a very convenient measure to go where you want, such as company, parks and other place.

✓ Definitely, if you work on the street you can see many people riding their bikes because it's a very convenient way to get to places you want to go, such as companies, parks and other places.

Multiple issues: 'as long as' is misused; the correct conditional is 'if' (Grammar Problem Type ID 16 but mainly preposition/connector misuse). 'Work on the street' is better as 'work on the street' is acceptable but 'if you work on the street' is fine. 'Ride their bikes' should be 'riding their bikes' to match continuous observation (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). 'A very convenient measure' is incorrect collocation; use 'a very convenient way' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). 'Go where you want' is awkward; 'get to places you want to go' is clearer. Also pluralization: 'company' -> 'companies' and 'other place' -> 'other places' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). These changes correct preposition and word choice and ensure correct plural forms.