Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly responds to the question, which is good. To improve, make the response slightly longer (up to 3–4 short sentences) by adding a brief reason or a short related detail using a linking word. This will show fluency and the ability to expand an answer naturally. Keep sentences simple and avoid repetition.

예시: No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small town and we mostly walked to nearby places. However, I sometimes borrowed bikes from friends to ride around the park. As a result, I still learned basic cycling skills.

제안: Your answer starts well by giving a clear opinion, but it is incomplete and contains repetition. To improve, finish your thought and add one or two specific supporting details (for example: reasons, comparisons, or examples). Use linking words (because, for example, moreover) to make the answer coherent and avoid repeating words. Keep to no more than 4–5 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or school in busy cities, which helps avoid traffic. Moreover, there are more bike lanes now, so cycling has become safer and more common.

× No, I did not have a bike as a child growing up.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was growing up.

The original sentence is understandable but slightly awkward in phrasing. The question used 'when you were a child', so use 'when I was growing up' to match tense and natural collocation. This keeps the past tense consistent and sounds more idiomatic. Suggestion: use 'when I was growing up' or simply 'when I was a child'.','grammar_problem_type_id':5},{

× I think bikes are popular in my country because they are a very easy means of transportation. They are they serve as.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because they are a very easy means of transportation; they serve that purpose well.

The original contains a repeated fragment 'They are they serve as', which is a sentence structure / redundancy error. It lacks a clear predicate in the second short sentence. The corrected version combines the ideas and provides a complete clause. Suggestion: avoid repeating subjects and ensure each clause has a verb and object; use a semicolon or conjunction to link related ideas.