Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and does not follow the Basic Structure rule. Give a direct response (topic sentence) then add 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Be natural and avoid single-word replies. For example, say whether you owned one, who gave it to you or how often you rode it, with a linking word like “because” or “so”. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was six, and I rode it to visit friends every weekend because it was my main way to get around the neighborhood.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has problems: some grammar issues, repetition, unclear phrases ("clears my bike"), and long, slightly off-topic personal reflection. Improve coherence by using linking words (however, because, so) and correct verb forms. Be specific about popularity (who uses bikes, for what) and then briefly add a personal reason. Limit to 3–4 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities for commuting and among students because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many people use bikes to travel short distances to work or school. Personally, I enjoy cycling because it clears my mind and helps me stay fit.

× Even I really like bikes and I always, you know, take time to ride bikes and I usually plan trips on bikes because that clears my bike, because riding bike clears my head and give me a very strong point of view to approach the world and conquer the problems.

✓ I also really like bikes and I always, you know, take time to ride my bike, and I usually plan trips on my bike because that clears my head; riding a bike clears my head and gives me a strong point of view to approach the world and solve problems.

Errors include third person singular verb agreement (give -> gives) when the subject is singular (riding a bike). Also several article and pronoun issues were present (my bike, a bike). Suggestions: use 'I also' instead of 'Even I', use possessive 'my bike' when referring to the speaker's bike, include the article 'a' before 'bike' in general statements, and ensure verbs agree with their subjects (riding a bike ... gives). Replace 'conquer the problems' with 'solve problems' for natural phrasing.

× Even I really like bikes and I always, you know, take time to ride bikes and I usually plan trips on bikes because that clears my bike, because riding bike clears my head and give me a very strong point of view to approach the world and conquer the problems.

✓ I also really like bikes and I always, you know, take time to ride my bike, and I usually plan trips on my bike because that clears my head; riding a bike clears my head and gives me a strong point of view to approach the world and solve problems.

The phrase 'that clears my bike' is incorrect and likely intended to be 'that clears my head.' This is a wrong word choice (adjective/adverb/phrase misuse). Use clear, appropriate collocations: 'clear my head' means to refresh thinking. Also 'conquer the problems' is awkward; use 'solve problems' or 'overcome problems.'

× I usually plan trips on bikes

✓ I usually plan trips on my bike

When referring to trips taken using the speaker's own bicycle, use the possessive 'my' and singular 'bike'. 'On bikes' is generic; 'on my bike' matches the sentence's personal context. Prepositions are okay ('on'), but the noun phrase needs correct determiners.