Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details (when you had it, what you liked about it). Use linking words if adding details. Avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was six, and I enjoyed riding it around the neighbourhood every afternoon.

제안: Be direct about popularity first, then give a specific reason or example. Keep sentences coherent and avoid unfinished fragments. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect your ideas and provide a clear supporting detail about popularity or personal experience.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, when I was six my mother bought me a bicycle, and I often rode it to school, which shows how common cycling is locally.

× I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used 'did have' which is unnecessary for a simple past statement. The question 'Did you have...?' invites a short affirmative 'Yes, I did.' but when repeating the full sentence, use the simple past 'I had a bike when I was a child.' Use auxiliary 'did' for emphasis or in negatives/questions, not for a plain past affirmative.

× When I was 6 my mother bought me a bicycle.

✓ When I was six, my mother bought me a bicycle.

Numbers under ten are usually written as words in formal English; more importantly, the sentence is past tense and correct in structure. Add a comma after the introductory time phrase 'When I was six' for clarity.

× I usually rode it to go to school.

✓ I usually rode it to school.

The verb phrase 'rode it to go to school' is redundant. 'Rode it to school' is the natural past tense expression. 'Usually' with past 'rode' is acceptable to express habitual past action.

× This that was a very.

✓ That was very special.

The original fragment 'This that was a very.' is ungrammatical and incomplete. It lacks a clear subject and a noun or adjective to complete the idea. A concise correction like 'That was very special.' provides a complete thought; choose an adjective that matches the intended meaning (e.g., 'fun', 'memorable').