Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear, grammatical and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and word choice (e.g. 'when I was a child', 'made it a habit', 'to go to school'). Avoid unnecessary or incorrect words like 'astray' and fix small grammar errors.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was about eight, and I used it every day to ride to school. Because our house was close to the school, cycling was faster than walking and became part of my daily routine.

제안: Answer directly and organize reasons with linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. 'depends on the age or area of people', not 'roof'). Give a clear opinion, then 1–2 specific reasons or examples. Fix grammar: subject-verb agreement, articles, and plural forms.

예시: I think it depends on the region and the age group. For example, many students and people in rural areas use bicycles because they are inexpensive and convenient, while in big cities people prefer motorcycles or public transport due to longer distances and traffic.

× Of course, when I was astray, my parents bought a bicycle for me and I make it a habit to use is to go to school.

✓ Of course. When I was a child, my parents bought a bicycle for me, and I made it a habit to use it to go to school.

This sentence has several issues: incorrect word choice ('astray' should be 'a child'), incorrect tense ('make' should be past 'made' to match 'bought'), incorrect pronoun/object ('is' should be 'it'), and run-on sentence structure. Suggestion: replace 'astray' with 'a child', change 'make' to 'made' for past narration, replace 'is' with 'it', and use punctuation or conjunctions to separate ideas for clarity.

× Well I think it depend on the roof of people when it come to the student they don't have a license so it can use the bicycle to go to school.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the group of people. When it comes to students, they don't have a license, so they can use bicycles to go to school.

Problems corrected: subject-verb agreement ('depend' -> 'depends'; 'come' -> 'comes'), incorrect word choice ('roof' -> 'group'), incorrect pronouns and pluralization ('it can use the bicycle' -> 'they can use bicycles'), and punctuation. Suggestions: ensure verbs agree with subjects in present tense, choose correct vocabulary ('group' not 'roof'), match pronouns to their antecedents, and use plural nouns when speaking generally about students.