Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, grammatically correct and give one or two supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then briefly add a specific detail and a linking word if needed. Avoid fragmented phrasing and correct verb tense and articles.

예시: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I used it to ride to school and the park every day.

제안: Answer directly and use clear vocabulary. Begin with a topic sentence stating your opinion, then give specific reasons and examples using linking words (for example, because, for instance, or also). Avoid unclear words like “budgets” and name brands only if relevant and explained.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and practical for short trips. For example, many people use simple commuter bikes for shopping and students use motorbikes such as the Apache for faster travel between towns.

× Yes, I have bike in my childhood and is.

✓ Yes, I had a bike in my childhood.

Grammar problem type IDs: 5 (Past tense issue) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). The student used present tense 'have' to describe a past period and omitted the article 'a', producing an ungrammatical fragment 'and is'. Correct sentence uses past tense 'had' and includes the indefinite article 'a'. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs when referring to past time ('had') and include appropriate articles ('a bike'). Remove unnecessary fragments ('and is').

× Of course we have.

✓ Of course we do.

Grammar problem type IDs: 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). The phrase 'we have' is incomplete without an object and sounds unnatural in response to 'Are bikes popular?' The correct short answer uses the auxiliary 'do' to agree with the present simple question: 'Of course we do.' Suggestion: Use short answers with the correct auxiliary verb ('do/does/did') when responding to yes/no questions about habits or facts.

× We have budgets.

✓ We have Bajaj bikes and Bajaj Pulsar motorcycles available.

Grammar problem type IDs: 22 (Article errors) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). The original 'We have budgets' is likely a mishearing/misuse: 'Budgets' is not a vehicle brand and lacks clarity. If the student meant a brand like 'Bajaj' or models like 'Pulsar' or 'Apache', they should use correct nouns and capitalization. Suggestion: Use the correct proper noun and, if listing examples, make them clear and parallel (e.g., 'We have Bajaj bikes and Apache motorcycles'). If 'budgets' was intended to mean 'budget bikes', say 'we have budget bikes'.

× We have Apache.

✓ We have Apache motorcycles.

Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors). 'Apache' is a model name and sounds incomplete alone; adding the noun 'motorcycles' clarifies meaning and fits the question about bike popularity. Suggestion: When mentioning brands or models, include the noun (bikes/motorcycles) for clarity.

× Yeah, it's popular in our country.

✓ Yes, they are popular in my country.

Grammar problem type IDs: 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns) and 6 (Present tense issue). The student used 'it's' (singular) after speaking about 'bikes' (plural). Use plural pronoun 'they' and ensure consistency with 'bikes' and the present simple 'are popular'. Also 'my country' is more typical for personal response. Suggestion: Match pronouns to the number of the noun ('bikes' -> 'they are') and use consistent person ('my country').