Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the tense and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. For example, use past simple for past facts, and avoid unnecessary words like “have had” in this context.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because my parents lived nearby, I often rode with my friends to the park.

제안: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement and article use), use linking words for coherence, and add a specific example or reason to support the opinion. Keep it to a few sentences and use vocabulary relevant to transport and convenience.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people cannot afford cars, so they choose bicycles as a cheap and efficient way to travel; additionally, bikes are convenient for short trips and help avoid traffic.

× Yes, I have had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present perfect 'have had' with a specific past time expression 'when I was a child'. In English, the simple past is required for actions completed at a definite time in the past. Use 'I had' instead of 'I have had'. Suggestion: Use simple past for finished past events with time markers (e.g., 'when I was a child', 'in 2010').

× Yes, because some people doesn't have cars and bikes are more efficient and convenient than just walking.

✓ Yes, because some people don't have cars, and bikes are more efficient and more convenient than walking.

The clause 'some people doesn't have' mixes a plural subject 'people' with the singular verb form 'doesn't'; correct is 'don't have'. Also 'than just walking' is acceptable but clearer as 'than walking', and parallelism improved by adding 'more' before 'convenient'. Suggestion: Match verb form to subject number (people -> don't). Keep comparisons parallel: 'more efficient and more convenient than walking' or simply 'more efficient and convenient than walking'.