Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify the main idea and correct vocabulary and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + short statement), then give 1–2 specific supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Avoid unrelated words (you said “bag/back” instead of “bike”) and incorrect grammar (use past tense: I had; my mom bought).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child because my mother bought it for me as a birthday gift. I loved riding it around the neighborhood and practiced every afternoon until I could ride without help.

제안: Make a clear general statement, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use correct vocabulary (bike, popular, commute) and grammar (present simple: are, use). Use linking words (because, for example, however) to connect ideas and avoid vague or incorrect comparisons.

예시: Yes, I do. Bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short daily commutes and to avoid traffic. For example, in cities you can see lots of people cycling to work or school, while in some countries like the Netherlands and China cycling is a common and convenient way to travel.

× Yes, I have a bag.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The student was asked about having a bike as a child; the original sentence uses the wrong noun and tense. Use 'had' (past tense) for past possession and use the correct noun 'bike' to match the question. Suggestion: refer directly to the object asked about and use past tense for childhood (I had a bike).

× When I was a child it was a right back.

✓ When I was a child it was a rucksack.

The phrase 'right back' is incorrect. The intended word is likely 'rucksack' (a type of bag) or 'backpack.' Also ensure article and reference match: 'it was a rucksack' is clear. Suggestion: choose the correct noun for the item (backpack/rucksack) and use it consistently.

× My mom's bought it for me as a gift.

✓ My mom bought it for me as a gift.

The contraction 'mom's bought' is nonstandard here; use simple past 'bought' to indicate a completed action in the past. The contracted possessive 'mom's' would be confusing. Suggestion: use 'My mom bought' when describing a past purchase.

× I like it very much.

✓ I liked it very much.

The student is describing feelings about the item in the past (childhood). Use past tense 'liked' to match the time frame 'when I was a child.' Suggestion: match verb tense to the time you are describing.

× Yes, I think back is very popular in my country as most people using bad to use for daily commute.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, as most people use bikes for their daily commute.

Multiple errors: wrong noun 'back' and 'bad', missing plural and subject-verb agreement, and incorrect verb form 'using'. Correct plural 'bikes' and present simple 'use' for habitual actions. Also add possessive 'their' for 'daily commute.' Suggestion: use 'bikes are' and 'most people use bikes' for general statements.

× It's quite popular either in Australia, either in China.

✓ They're quite popular both in Australia and in China.

Incorrect use of 'either' twice. Use 'both ... and ...' for positive statements about two places, and plural subject 'they're' (bikes) to match. Suggestion: use 'both ... and ...' or 'in both Australia and China'.

× Finish.

✓ That's all.

Single-word 'Finish' is unnatural in this context. Use a short closing phrase such as 'That's all' or 'I've finished' to indicate completion. Suggestion: use natural closing expressions appropriate to speaking tests.