Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer does not address the question. In Part 1 you should respond directly and briefly to the examiner’s question with a topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and relevant (avoid greetings). For example, state whether you had a bike, give a short detail about it and maybe say why you liked it. Use linking words if you add a second detail.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used it to ride with my friends around the neighborhood. Because it had a comfortable seat and wide tires, I felt confident riding it on rough paths.

제안: Your answer attempts to respond but has grammar mistakes and unclear phrasing. To improve, give a clear opinion in one sentence, then add a specific supporting reason with correct grammar and linking words. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, word order, and article use. Be concise (max 4–5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people use bikes for short trips because they are cheap and convenient. For example, in rural areas people often ride bicycles to the market, while in cities some commuters use them to avoid traffic and save money.

× Is my country inn popular in bikes?

✓ Are bikes popular in my country?

The original sentence contains incorrect word order and a typo 'inn'. The pronoun placement and noun phrase are wrong for asking about general popularity. Use the subject 'bikes' at the start with the verb 'are' for a yes/no question and place the location phrase 'in my country' after the subject. Also correct 'inn' to 'in'. Suggestion: Form yes/no questions with auxiliary + subject + main noun (Are bikes + ... + in my country).

× Many people rides bikes and rural area to city area people drive bikes.

✓ Many people ride bikes, and people from rural areas drive bikes to the cities.

'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'ride' not 'rides' (subject-verb agreement). The phrase 'rural area to city area people' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'people from rural areas' to indicate origin and 'drive bikes to the cities' or 'drive to the city' to clarify movement. Also add a comma and conjunction to join the two clauses. Suggestion: Ensure verbs match plural subjects and reorder noun phrases for clarity.