Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the tense and answer directly with a brief topic sentence, then add one supporting detail. Use past tense for childhood and a linking word if you add more information. Be specific about whether you owned a bike and why or why not.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my neighbor’s bike to ride to school and around the neighborhood because my family couldn’t afford to buy one.

제안: Give a clear direct opinion about popularity, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Avoid unclear words and pronunciation errors; use vocabulary relevant to popularity and gender norms if you discuss them. Keep to two or three short sentences.

예시: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among men and children. However, in some areas women are less likely to cycle due to cultural expectations and concerns about safety.

× When I have a child, I don't have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

The student used the present tense 'have' and 'don't have' but the examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'). This is a tense error (Present tense issue). Change to past tense 'was' and 'didn't have' to match the time reference. Suggestion: identify the time frame (past) and use past tense verbs; use 'was' for 'be' with first person singular in this context and 'didn't' for negation in simple past.

× Tree is not popular specific for a girl because it's a. Bit of shame for girls.

✓ Bicycles are not very popular for girls because some people think it's a bit shameful for them.

The original sentence has several problems: 'Tree' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'three' or 'bike' but context indicates 'bikes' (sentence structure error). 'Specific for a girl' is incorrect word order and choice; use 'for girls'. 'It's a. Bit of shame' has punctuation and adjective choice errors — 'shameful' instead of 'of shame'. Overall this is a sentence structure error: reorder words, use correct noun plural ('bicycles' or 'bikes'), correct adjective form 'shameful', and maintain subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: clarify the subject ('bicycles' or 'bikes'), use plural for general statements, place modifiers ('for girls') after the noun, and use 'shameful' to describe feelings or opinions.