Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 改善点：回答は簡潔なトピック文で始め、具体的な理由や頻度、影響を示す詳細を付け加えてください。文法（冠詞と時制）と語彙を正し、繋ぎ言葉（for example, moreover, thereforeなど）を使って文の流れを良くしましょう。例：’bikes are popular’ と主語複数形にし、観察を一般化する際は具体的な証拠（通勤者の割合、シェアバイクの増加など）を述べると高得点になります。発言は最大5文に収め、無駄な填充語（uh, um）を減らしてください。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for commuting because public transport can be crowded. In recent years, bike-sharing schemes have also become widespread, which encourages more people to ride. Therefore, you can see cyclists on most city streets every day.

× Uh, I think bike is popular because I am uh, I see a person, uh, who rode a bike every day.

✓ Uh, I think bikes are popular because I, uh, see people who ride bikes every day.

The noun 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') when speaking generally about popularity. 'A person' and 'who rode a bike every day' mix singular reference and past tense incorrectly; use 'people' and present tense 'ride' to match the general, habitual idea. Also remove the unnecessary 'am' before 'uh' and streamline filler words. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements (bikes, people) and present simple for habitual actions (ride).