Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question and did not answer. For a better score, answer directly with a topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural, avoid repetition, and use linking words if you add details. For example, say whether you had a bike, give a brief reason or a memory, and finish in no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to school and play with my friends in the park, and I remember fixing a flat tyre once with my father. Because I practiced every day, I became quite confident cycling on busy roads.

제안: Your answer gives a short opinion but is informal and asks the examiner a question, which is unnecessary. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, 'because' or 'for instance'). Keep responses concise and natural, up to 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For instance, cities have dedicated bike lanes and you often see students and delivery workers riding. As a result, cycling is a common and practical way to get around.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. It properly uses past simple to ask about possession in childhood.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's response exactly repeated the question, which is inappropriate. The correct response should use past simple affirmative: 'Yes, I did.' or 'I had a bike when I was a child.' This matches the examiner's question tense and provides a direct answer. Suggestion: answer with a short 'Yes, I did.' or a full sentence 'I had a bike when I was a child.' to avoid repetition.

× Yeah, I think the bikes are popular in my country. What What about your country?

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country. What about your country?

Use of the definite article 'the' before 'bikes' is unnecessary when speaking about bikes in general. General plural nouns do not require 'the'. Also the word 'What' was repeated twice; remove the duplicate. Suggestion: say 'I think bikes are popular' for general statements, and avoid repeating words.