Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the examiner's past-tense question using past tense and a clear topic sentence. Keep the reply natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., who you rode with, how often, or a memorable moment) and use a linking word if you add a second sentence.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day, and sometimes my father would teach me tricks on weekends.

제안: Provide a direct topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples and use a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid unnecessary articles (say "bikes are" not "the bikes are") and aim for natural phrasing. Limit to up to 5 sentences and include concrete details (e.g., statistics, typical users, or common uses).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and shopping. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and affordable bike-sharing schemes, so students and workers often prefer cycling to avoid traffic.

× Do you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The examiner's question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student's reply should use past tense to match. The student used present tense 'Do you have', which is inconsistent. Use 'Did you have' for past simple. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time reference in the sentence (use past simple for completed past situations).

× Yes, the bikes are very popular in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country.

The question asks generally about bikes in the country, so a general statement does not require the definite article 'the' before 'bikes'. Using 'the bikes' implies a specific group of bikes already identified. Removing 'the' makes it a correct general statement. Suggestion: for generalizations about a class or activity, omit the definite article before a plural common noun (e.g., 'Cars are expensive', 'Bikes are popular').