Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the tense and make the sentence natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use past tense and avoid repetition. For example, say when you had it and a brief reason or memory to enrich the answer.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my seventh birthday and rode it every day to visit friends in the neighborhood.

제안: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and a specific reason. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) and choose precise vocabulary (heavy traffic, convenient, inexpensive). Avoid filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases like 'two wheel bike'.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because traffic is heavy and they are an inexpensive, convenient way to get around, especially in crowded cities.

× Yes, I had a bike when I am a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I ... a child'), so the subordinate clause must use past tense. 'am' is present tense and mismatches 'had'. Change 'am' to 'was' to ensure consistent past-time reference and subject-verb agreement for 'I'. Suggestion: use 'was' for past state descriptions (I was a child).

× Yes, in my country bikes are very popular because of uh traffic and two wheel bike.

✓ Yes, in my country bikes are very popular because of traffic and two-wheel bikes.

There are two issues: 'uh' is a filler and should be removed in written response; 'two wheel bike' needs hyphenation and correct plurality. 'Two-wheel' should be hyphenated when used as a compound adjective before a noun, and 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') to match general reference. Also 'traffic' does not require an article here. Suggestion: remove fillers, hyphenate compound adjectives ('two-wheel'), and keep noun number consistent with general statements (use plural 'bikes').