Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a clear direct answer (yes/no or short statement) followed by 1–2 brief supporting details. Keep it natural and avoid repeating the question. Use linking words (for example, because/so/when) to make the answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle until I was about ten, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon because it was faster than walking.

제안: Your answer is very short and lacks supporting detail. Expand with a topic sentence and one or two specific reasons or examples, using linking words (for example, because/also/for instance) to make your response more informative and natural. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I believe bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and rental services, so cycling is a common, affordable way to travel.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question, which creates a sentence structure error: it does not directly answer the yes/no question. According to the prompt, corrections must follow listed grammar problem types; this is best classified as a sentence structure error (type 26). The correct short answer to a past-tense yes/no question uses the auxiliary did plus the subject and optionally the main verb in base form (Yes, I did. / No, I didn't.). Suggestion: respond directly to yes/no questions with 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' and avoid repeating the full question.

× Yes, I believe so.

✓ Yes, I believe they are.

The examiner asks about the general present situation of bikes in the country, so the student's reply should explicitly use present tense and a clear subject. The original 'Yes, I believe so.' is grammatically acceptable but vague; to make the tense and subject explicit, use present tense with a plural subject (they/people/bikes). This relates to present tense usage (type 6). Suggestion: use a clear subject and present-tense verb, e.g., 'Yes, I believe bikes are popular.' or 'Yes, I believe they are.'