Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer direct, use past tense for a past question, avoid irrelevant details, and provide clear reasons with linking words. Keep it within 2–4 sentences. Correct grammar (e.g., I didn't have, because of financial problems, I couldn't afford a bike, and I didn't have a license).

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I couldn't afford one because my family had financial problems, and later I never learned to ride or get a license. As a result, I usually walked or used public transport to get around.

제안: Answer directly, expand with 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words, and use more natural phrasing and grammar. Avoid short fragments; combine ideas into complete sentences and give examples or reasons (e.g., affordability, convenience, traffic).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and help people avoid traffic. For example, many commuters use motorcycles to travel short distances, and students often ride bicycles to school because they are cheap and convenient.

× No I don't because I was too sad in my teenage and by due to my financial problem I can't buy bike.

✓ No, I didn't because I was very poor during my teenage years and due to my financial problems I couldn't buy a bike.

The student mixes present and past tenses incorrectly: 'No I don't' should be past 'No, I didn't' to match 'when you were a child'. 'was too sad in my teenage' is awkward and unclear; use 'was very poor during my teenage years' if financial reasons are meant. 'by due to' is ungrammatical; use 'due to'. 'I can't buy bike' should be past 'I couldn't buy a bike' and include the article 'a'. Overall, keep past tense consistently and use correct articles and wording.

× And I I don't know how to write and I can't made a license so.

✓ And I didn't know how to write, and I couldn't get a license.

Pronoun and verb forms are mixed with tense errors. 'I I' is a repetition. 'I don't know how to write' should be past 'I didn't know how to write' to match the context. 'I can't made a license' uses wrong auxiliary and verb form; use 'couldn't get a license' or 'couldn't obtain a license'. Also remove filler 'so'. Ensure consistent past tense and correct verb forms.

× Yes, the bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

Using 'the bikes' implies specific bikes; general statement about bikes uses no article: 'bikes are popular'. Tense is fine (present simple) for a general fact, but article usage should be corrected.

× Enjoy rides.

✓ People enjoy riding them.

'Enjoy rides' is a fragment and not natural in English. Use a full sentence with subject and verb: 'People enjoy riding them' or 'People enjoy bike rides.' Also use the gerund 'riding' after 'enjoy'.

× Bike people have their personal bikes and it makes them easy to ride one place to another place rather than waiting for a public vehicles.

✓ People who own bikes have their own bicycles, and it makes it easy for them to travel from one place to another rather than waiting for public transport.

The phrase 'Bike people' is informal; use 'People who own bikes'. 'Personal bikes' is better as 'their own bicycles'. 'It makes them easy to ride' is ungrammatical—use 'it makes it easy for them to travel'. 'One place to another place' is redundant; use 'from one place to another'. 'a public vehicles' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'public transport' or 'public vehicles' without 'a'. Also maintain subject-verb clarity and correct word choice.