Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap kısa ve doğrudan kopyalanmış; kişisel bilgi, detay ve bağlaç eksik. Soruyu doğrudan cevaplayın (örneğin “Yes, I did” veya “No, I didn’t”), ardından yaş, nasıl kullandığınız veya bisikletle ilgili bir anı gibi 1–2 destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Cevap 3–4 cümle olmalı ve ‘when’, ‘often’, ‘because’ gibi bağlaçlar kullanarak akışı sağlayın.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. Because our neighborhood was safe and quiet, I felt confident practicing new skills like balancing and turning. Those rides helped me become more independent.

제안: Cevap kısa, genelleyici ve açıklama eksik; daha doğal bir yapı ve spesifik nedenler ekleyin. Önce doğrudan görüşünüzü söyleyin, sonra ‘because’ ya da ‘however’ gibi bağlaçlarla sebepler veya örnekler verin (örneğin altyapı, iklim, kültür). Mümkünse bir karşılaştırma veya sonuç ekleyin. Toplam 3–4 cümle yeterli.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. This is mainly because many cities lack safe bike lanes and the traffic can be dangerous for cyclists. However, some people still use bicycles for exercise or short trips in quieter areas, and I hope cycling becomes more common if infrastructure improves.

× Bikes are not popular in my country. People don't use a bike.

✓ Bikes are not popular in my country. People don't use bikes.

The sentence uses a plural subject 'People' with the singular noun phrase 'a bike', which is unnatural and ungrammatical in this context. Use the plural noun 'bikes' to match 'People' and to express a general habit. Suggestion: replace 'a bike' with 'bikes' to maintain number agreement and general reference.