Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and redundant phrases. Use proper verb tenses and simple, accurate vocabulary (e.g., ‘bicycle’ or ‘bike’, ‘ride every evening after school’).

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. However, I now own a bicycle and I ride it every evening after school to relax and get some exercise.

제안: Answer directly, then give clear, specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., ‘bikes are very popular’, ‘people use them for shopping or commuting’). Avoid confusing phrases and repetitions. Provide one or two concrete examples or a short comparison to other transport to make your point clearer.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles to buy groceries or travel short distances because they are cheap and convenient, whereas buses are used for longer journeys.

× No, I didn't have a bike, but I have a cycle and I uh, ride every day, uh, in the evening time when uh, after finish my school, uh, and I enjoy it to ride bike or something on yeah.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but I have a bicycle now and I ride it every day in the evening after I finish school, and I enjoy riding my bike.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'have a cycle' -> use 'have a bicycle' (word choice). 'ride every day... after finish my school' -> needs subject and correct tense: 'after I finish school' (present simple for habitual action). 'I enjoy it to ride bike' -> incorrect infinitive; should be gerund: 'I enjoy riding my bike'. Suggestion: Use consistent simple present for habitual actions, include the subject with verbs, and use gerunds after 'enjoy'.

× Yeah, definitely. It's my country. It's bike at two more popular and every man or woman can write for personal or personal needs something need something groceries to going out the bars.

✓ Yes, definitely. In my country bikes are very popular, and everyone can ride one for personal needs, such as shopping or going out to bars.

Errors include wrong adjective/adverb forms and word choice: 'It's bike at two more popular' is ungrammatical; correct comparative is 'very popular' or 'more popular than...'. 'every man or woman can write' -> 'ride' (spelling) and 'write' is incorrect verb. 'personal or personal needs' is redundant. 'groceries to going out the bars' -> wrong structure; use 'for shopping or going out to bars'. Suggestion: Use plural 'bikes are', appropriate adjectives like 'very popular', correct verb 'ride', and parallel structure for examples.

× No, not just bus and bike. It's truly significant impact in my country.

✓ It's not just buses and bikes; they have a truly significant impact in my country.

Fragment and article/number agreement issues: 'No, not just bus and bike.' is a fragment lacking subject and plural nouns; should be 'not just buses and bikes.' 'It's truly significant impact' mixes subject 'it' with noun 'impact' incorrectly; use 'they have a truly significant impact' or 'they are truly significant'. Suggestion: Ensure subjects and verbs agree and complete the sentence; pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.