Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, tense consistency and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence (past simple), use correct possessive/plural forms, and give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Limit to 2–4 sentences. For example, say you didn’t have a bike, explain why, and add a brief memory or result.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school with my friends, which helped us become close.

제안: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid filler words. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences): state whether bikes are popular, then explain why with an example or contrast.

예시: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorcycles and cars for convenience. However, some people still cycle for exercise or short trips in parks.

× No, we don't have a bike when I have a child 'cause my parent cannot afford to buy a bike when we were. I remember when we were young, when we're going to school. Uh, it's the motive for.

✓ No, we didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford to buy one when we were young. I remember when we were going to school, and it was the reason.

Errors: present tense 'don't have' and 'have' used instead of past tense; subject-verb agreement and plural noun: 'parent' should be 'parents'; incorrect pronoun/article: use 'one' for a single bike; awkward clause 'when we were' missing object; inconsistent tenses in same sentence. Suggestions: Use past simple for past situations (didn't have, was a child, couldn't afford), use plural for parents, use 'one' or 'a bike' to avoid repetition, and keep tense consistent across clauses. Rephrase colloquial fragments to complete sentences (add 'and it was the reason' or better explain the motive).

× Uh, no, because in this generation the mode of transportation is motorcycle, cars, uh, bikes, bike are no longer to be used and uh, you can only use when you like.

✓ No, because in this generation the main modes of transportation are motorcycles and cars; bikes are no longer commonly used, and you can only use them if you want to.

Errors: singular 'mode' versus plural 'modes' needed when listing multiple vehicles; incorrect article use and pluralization: 'motorcycle, cars' inconsistent — use 'motorcycles and cars'; subject-verb agreement: 'bike are' should be 'bikes are'; missing object after 'use' — 'used' needs adverb 'commonly' or phrase 'no longer commonly used'; missing pronoun after 'only use' — add 'them' or complete clause 'if you want to'. Suggestions: Match singular/plural with listed items, ensure subject and verb agree, use parallel structure when listing, and complete clauses for clarity.