Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant, with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. To improve, remove hesitation (“Yes, yes”), vary sentence openings, add one more specific detail (e.g., how you felt or a memorable moment), and avoid redundancy to stay concise. Keep responses to no more than five sentences and use a linking word when adding detail.

예시: Yes, I had a bike as a child. I rode it every afternoon around our neighborhood with my cousins, and we often raced to the corner store. Because I practiced so much, I became confident riding on busy streets.

제안: The answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but contains hesitations and repetition (“very much expensive” repeated). To improve, remove filler words (uh, umm), use varied vocabulary (e.g., expensive, costly), and add a linking word to connect reason and example. Provide a concise, specific example or statistic if possible.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in the Philippines because public transport and fuel are expensive. For example, many commuters cycle to work to save money and avoid traffic, especially in urban areas.

× I remember having a bike when I was a child.

✓ I remember having a bike when I was a child.

No correction needed. The sentence is grammatically correct and uses prepositions appropriately. Keep as is.

× I used to ride it all day and just roll around our neighborhood together with my cousins.

✓ I used to ride it all day and just ride around our neighborhood with my cousins.

The phrase 'roll around our neighborhood' is informal and can be unclear; 'ride around' is more appropriate when referring to bicycles. Also 'together with my cousins' is wordy; use 'with my cousins' for natural sentence flow. This keeps past habitual tense 'used to' consistent.

× Yes, bikes are very popular here in the Philippines uh, since transport cost is very much expensive, most people uh use their bikes to go from point A to point B, especially when gas umm, prices are very much expensive.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular here in the Philippines. Since transport costs are very expensive, most people use their bikes to go from point A to point B, especially when gas prices are so high.

Multiple issues: 'transport cost' should be plural 'transport costs' because it refers to costs in general (Grammar problem type: incorrect use of quantifier/plural but mapped here to prepositions/word form). 'Very much expensive' is unidiomatic; use 'very expensive' or 'so high'. Remove filler words 'uh/umm' for clarity and separate into two sentences for readability. 'Use their bikes' is correct; keep present simple to answer general fact question.