Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct tenses and linking words. Avoid repetitions and filler sounds (e.g., "uh").

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child, but it belonged to my father rather than me. For example, I used his bicycle to ride to school and to visit friends every weekend, so it felt like my bike even though I didn’t buy it myself.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and correct grammar (plural/singular, verb forms). Avoid vague phrases like "a many" and repeating words.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are inexpensive and practical. For example, many people use bicycles to carry goods to the market and to travel short distances in rural areas, so bikes remain an affordable and common mode of transport.

× Yes, I have a bike when I am a child because it's uh a bike of my father and I did not purchase it so and I do not have my bike. I have my father bike and it's a well and good bike, so I can.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because it belonged to my father and I did not buy it. I did not own my own bike; I had my father's bike, and it was a very good bike.

Problems: mixed present and past tenses, incorrect possession expressions, article errors, and awkward phrasing. This sentence mixes present ('have', 'am') with past experiences—use past tense consistently ('had', 'was'). Use 'belonged to' or 'my father's bike' to show possession instead of 'a bike of my father' or 'my father bike'. Use 'buy' (past 'bought') or 'did not buy' for negative past. Use articles: 'my father's bike' and 'a very good bike'. Suggestion: keep past tense for childhood events, use correct possessive form (father's), and simplify sentences into clear clauses.

× Yes I think bike are quite popular in my country so I see a many bikes use using for mar for a market and and local areas work so they use it and it's very cheap also.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I see many bikes being used for markets and local work, so people use them because they are very cheap.

Problems: singular/plural and subject-verb agreement ('bike are' should be 'bikes are'), incorrect article and quantifier ('a many bikes' -> 'many bikes'), incorrect verb forms and word order ('use using' -> 'being used'), and unclear nouns ('mar' should be 'markets'). Also pronoun agreement ('it' -> 'them' for plural 'bikes'). Suggestion: use plural 'bikes' with 'are', remove unnecessary articles before 'many', use passive gerund 'being used' or active 'are used', and match pronouns to plural nouns.