Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and grammatically correct, keep it concise, and add one specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and articles, and use a linking word to expand briefly.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle that I rode with my brother every evening after school; for example, we would cycle around our neighborhood park for about thirty minutes, which helped me relax after classes.

제안: Use correct plural/singular forms and tense, provide a short reason or example, and use a linking word to make it coherent. Keep it within a few sentences and be specific about where or who uses bikes.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many children and students use them for short trips; for instance, when I was a child I often saw kids riding around our neighborhood in the evenings.

× Absolutely yes. I have a bike.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I had a bike.

The question asked about having a bike when the student was a child, so a past-tense verb is required. 'Have' is present tense; 'had' is the correct past-tense form. Use past tense to match the time frame of 'when you were a child.' Suggestion: Use past tense verbs when describing past situations (e.g., 'I had a bike').

× When I was child I used to ride with my brother every evening after school around my house and I found that this is the way for me to relax and enjoy it.

✓ When I was a child, I used to ride with my brother every evening after school around my house, and I found that it was a way for me to relax and enjoy myself.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'child' and incorrect reflexive/pronominal object 'enjoy it.' Also tense consistency: 'found' is past so follow with past 'was.' 'Enjoy myself' is the correct reflexive pronoun because the subject is the one enjoying. Suggestions: Add the article ('a child'), keep past-tense consistency ('was'), and use the reflexive pronoun ('myself') when the subject performs the action on themselves. Add commas for clarity.

× In my opinion, bike are popular in my country.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are popular in my country.

'Bike' is singular while 'are' is plural; this is a subject-verb agreement/number mismatch. Use the plural noun 'bikes' to match the plural verb 'are' when speaking generally about the category. Alternatively, change verb to singular ('is') with 'a bike' for a different meaning. Suggestion: Use plural form for general statements (e.g., 'bikes are popular').

× Since I was kid I have seen many children around my neighborhood ride a bike together and enjoy it so much.

✓ Since I was a kid, I have seen many children around my neighborhood riding bikes together and enjoying themselves so much.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'kid' and tense/form problems. 'Since I was a kid' correctly introduces a time period and pairs with present perfect 'have seen.' Use 'riding' (present participle) after 'seen' when describing what you observed. Use plural 'bikes' for general activity and 'enjoying themselves' as the correct reflexive pronoun for plural children. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Include articles ('a kid'), use '-ing' form after verbs of perception when appropriate, pluralize nouns for general statements, and use correct reflexive pronouns.