Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no and brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and avoid repetition. For example, state whether you had a bike, mention when or what kind, and give a short reason or memory linked with words like "because" or "so".

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used it almost every weekend because my parents took me to the park. As a result, I learned to ride confidently by the time I was seven.

제안: The answer addresses the question and gives contrast, but has minor grammar and fluency issues (hesitation/repetition "on on"), slightly awkward phrasing, and could be more specific. Improve by removing repetition, using a clear topic sentence, adding a specific example or statistic, and linking words such as "however" or "but" for coherence. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country as a hobby or for recreation; many people cycle in parks and on weekends. However, they are not commonly used for daily commuting because city infrastructure and long distances make cars or public transport more practical.

× Yes, it's quite popular here in our country in the sense of using it as on on hobby or on recreational activity, but having it used as a mode of transportation, it's not.

✓ Yes, they're quite popular here in our country as hobbies or recreational activities, but they are not commonly used as a mode of transportation.

The student uses 'it' to refer to 'bikes' which is plural, so plural pronouns and verbs should be used (they, are). This is a pronoun and subject-verb agreement issue. Also 'on on' is a repetition error and the preposition 'as on hobby' is incorrect; we use 'as a hobby' or plural 'as hobbies'. The clause 'having it used as a mode of transportation, it's not' is awkward and ungrammatical; replace with 'they are not commonly used as a mode of transportation'. Suggestion: identify the noun number (singular/plural) and match pronouns and verbs accordingly; remove duplicated words and use standard collocations such as 'as a hobby' or 'as hobbies' and 'commonly used'. Grammar problem type ID:12