Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The student simply echoed the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct topic sentence answering the question (yes/no) and follow with one or two specific supporting details. Keep responses concise (max 5 sentences) and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight years old. I used it every day to ride to my friend’s house and to the park because it was a quick and fun way to get around.

제안: The answer is clear and relevant but has repetition ('except except') and some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Improve coherence by using a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific examples (e.g., which cities, who cycles), and use linking words ('however', 'because', 'for example'). Correct minor grammar: 'All those cycling is becoming' → 'However, cycling is becoming'.

예시: No, bicycles aren't very popular across the country because most people prefer cars or motorbikes for speed and convenience. However, in some large cities like X and Y cycling is becoming more common for leisure and short commutes, especially among students and young professionals.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The student's repetition of the examiner's question is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Instead of repeating the question, provide a direct answer. Use the past simple 'did have' to match the question tense and make the response complete and natural: 'Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.'

× No, bicycles aren't very popular in my country, except except in some cities, most people prefer cars or motorbikes because they're faster and more convenient.

✓ No, bicycles aren't very popular in my country except in some cities; most people prefer cars or motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient.

This sentence has repetition ('except except') and a run-on/comma splice, which are sentence structure errors (ID 26). Remove the duplicate 'except', join the clauses correctly using a semicolon or a period, and avoid contractions for clarity if desired. Also expand 'they're' to 'they are' if more formal tone is required. The corrected sentence fixes redundancy and joins independent clauses properly.

× All those cycling is becoming more common for leisure and exercise.

✓ Cycling is becoming more common for leisure and exercise.

The phrase 'All those cycling' is ungrammatical; this is an incorrect word choice and sentence structure error (IDs 26 and 13). Use the gerund 'Cycling' as the subject with singular verb 'is' to agree: 'Cycling is becoming more common for leisure and exercise.' This makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.