Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (past simple) and natural phrasing. Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences) and avoid repeating the examiner's question. For example, state whether you had a bike, give a brief detail (who gave it to you or how often you rode), and a short reason or memory.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to visit my friends every afternoon. I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels, which made me feel very independent.

제안: Respond with a full sentence and provide specific supporting details and linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Use correct grammar ("bikes are popular" not "bike is a popular"). Give reasons or examples to explain why they are popular. Keep it natural and concise (2–4 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities you can see many commuters cycling to work due to heavy traffic and limited parking, and in rural areas people often use bicycles for market visits.

× Yes, in my country bike is a popular.

✓ Yes, in my country a bike is popular.

The error is an article error (ID 22). The singular noun 'bike' needs an article before it; use the indefinite article 'a' to indicate one bike in general. Alternatively, to speak about bikes in general, you could say 'Bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: choose 'a bike' for singular or pluralize to 'bikes' when making a general statement about the category.