Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct past-tense answer and expand with one or two specific supporting details. Use past tense ('I had') and add a brief reason or memory. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red BMX that I rode to school and around the neighbourhood every day. I remember learning to ride it with my father pushing me until I could balance on my own.

제안: Start with a clear opinion and use correct grammar and linking words. Give a specific estimate or observation and a reason or comparison. Use full sentences, proper subject-verb agreement, and linking phrases like 'because' or 'for example.'

예시: I think bikes are somewhat popular in my country; about 20% of people use them regularly. For example, many commuters cycle in the city because traffic is heavy and parking is expensive.

× I have a bike.

✓ I had a bike.

The examiner asked about possession during childhood using past tense 'Did you have...'. The student's response must match that past timeframe. Use past tense 'had' instead of present 'have'. Suggestion: Align verb tense with the time reference in the question (use past simple for actions or states in the past).

× 20% people in my country you use bike.

✓ About 20% of people in my country use bikes.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues: missing preposition 'of' after the percentage, incorrect placement of 'you', missing plural noun form for 'bike', and awkward word order. Correction includes 'About' to soften the statistic, 'of people' to link percentage to people, plural 'bikes' to match general usage, and subject-verb agreement 'people use'. Suggestion: Place percentage before 'of people', use correct subject (people) without 'you', ensure noun pluralization when speaking generally, and use proper word order 'X of people ... use ...'. Also ensure agreement between subject and verb.